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PostSubject: My Captain   Sun Jul 05, 2015 11:32 pm

My Captain

Sara worked at a Kindercare in the suburbs of Chicago, and she really enjoyed her work, but she was looking forward to the weekend. It was her birthday and she planned on celebrating it with her friends and her family. She didn’t know that it was going to turn into something much more. It was 3 pm on a Friday afternoon and taking care of the children as she normally did, until she heard the classroom door open to see her coworker Katy standing there. This wasn’t something out of the ordinary, sometimes she came into her classroom at this time to visit Jonte the adorable little curly haired boy in the room. Sara also noticed a little smug look on her face, but didn’t think much of it at the time.

Sara smiled at the fact that they were both wearing their green St. Patrick’s day Toews t-shirts, they always wore Blackhawks shirts to work on game days, both of the girls had a crush on the 27 year old hockey player from Winnipeg, Canada.

“Hey Katy, nice shirt. Did you come to visit your lil man?” Sara asked smiling.

“No, not this time.” Katy said smiling as another coworker Carol walked into the classroom. “We’re leaving, Carol is here to relieve you. Your birthday weekend starts now.” Katy said before she handed her an envelope, that she was holding behind her back. Sara hadn’t noticed she had her hand behind her back.

“Are you kidnapping me? Does Kathy approve?” Sara asked raising her eyebrows at her, as she opened the envelope and almost collapsed on the floor when she pulled out two tickets for the Blackhawks game that night.

“Katy! You did not have to do this for me!” Sara said excitedly, as she was grinning ear to ear and her heart was racing from excitement. She thought she’d just be catching the game at a bar somewhere.

“Let’s go, we need to make sure we have time for Portillo’s before the game.” Katy said smiling. They had certain traditions that the girls did before they went to a Blackhawks game.

Sara smiled before she went over to the closet to take out her coat and her purse and put them on. “You know if I had known this was happening, I would have brought my jersey with me.” When Sara turned around she saw Katy holding a Blackhawks gift bag with black and red ribbons on it.

“I took care of that for you, let’s just say I had this day planned.” Katy said smiling as she handed Sara the bag. Sara took the bag from Katy and she took out the red tissue paper and she squealed when she saw a black and white vintage Jonathan Toews jersey inside, this was so much better than her cheap Kohls youth boys jersey she had back at their apartment.

“Thank you Katy!” she said smiling giving her a hug before she took the jersey out of the bag and changed into it, she was glad she was already wearing her dark blue jeggings and she had a pair of comfy black boots to wear too.

Sara put her coat back on before the two girls gathered their purses and left work, and everyone else they worked with wished Sara happy birthday and hoped she would have a great time. She was about to have a birthday she would never forget.

The two girls were making their way into Chicago for the game, Sara was shaking her leg out of excitement.

“Did you happen to see where our seats are?” Katy asked smiling as they excited the highway.

“No, I was too busy freaking out that I had tickets in my hands to begin with.” Sara replied smiling. “Why? Where are the seats?”

“My uncle was able to get us tickets for the two seats in between the team benches!” Katy said excitedly.

“No way! Aren’t those almost impossible to get?!” Sara asked as she took the tickets out to look at them more carefully. She couldn’t believe it, nothing like this ever happened to her. They were going to be so close to the players, she wasn’t sure if she would even watch the game, just stare at the cute Blackhawks players.

“Well, now I know why you insisted on me making sure I wore the right clothes tonight, and thank you again for taking the time to do something with my hair, have I told you how a much of an awesome roommate you are?”

“You’re welcome, you deserve it. We have both been working so hard, and you deserve to have the best birthday.” Katy told her smiling.

When the girls finally arrived at the United Center, they had their tickets scanned and they were given the giveaway for the night which was a Jonathan Toews bobble-head doll.

“Aww, we have our own little Johnny’s to take back home with us.” Katy said smiling.

“This one isn’t as cute as the real one, and it’s too bad we can’t just take the real one home with us.” Sara said smiling.

“At least we will be able to see him up close all night long.” Katy said squealing a little. Sara squealed with her at the realization of this thought, she couldn’t believe this was happening and they weren’t even in their seats yet.

“You should have worn your Toews jersey, we could be twins.” Sara told her, but she knew Katy had her superstitions when it came to Blackhawks games. Katy always wore the same shirt to the games. Katy smiled back at her, and Sara knew she was thinking the same thing she was.

The girls finally made their way to their seats, after they found an usher to take them down. Sara felt like she was in a dream when she saw the ice rink getting bigger as they walked closer to it.

“Here are your seats ladies!” the usher told them. “Enjoy the game!”

“Thank you so much.” Sara said smiling as she turned around to take everything in. It was amazing to be so close, she felt like she was on the ice. She could only picture what it would be like when the Blackhawks came out for their warm-ups, and her heart was already racing a little at the thought of seeing her favorite players up so close. Then she noticed fans gathering near the tunnel where the players come out of, and knew they were about to come out. At that moment she did pull her phone out so she could take pictures as they came out, the anticipation was almost too much.

Then the goal horn sounded and a sea of red poured out of the tunnel, and she erupted in cheers as she got a video of the team. Her heart seemed to skip a beat when she saw #19 come out and knock the stack of pucks onto the ice for warm-ups. She was just as excited to see the rest of the team up so close, it was so exciting.

“This is so amazing!!” Sara said smiling from ear to ear as she got another video of the team skating around on the ice, and doing practice shots.

“Give me your phone, I’ll take your picture!” Katy said smiling. Sara gave Katy her phone and then she went to stand in front of where the Blackhawks were practicing, and she made her hair looked ok before she smiled and gave the camera a thumbs up, and an excited face.

Behind her on the ice she didn’t realize that the Captain happened to look over at the two girls in the special seats between the benches, and he noticed one of them wearing his jersey, he noticed the other one holding a phone probably getting ready to take the other girls picture.

He normally didn’t focus his attention away from the warm-ups, but he recently became single as he broke things off with his supermodel girlfriend, after he had seen pictures of her kissing someone else. He was severely hurt, as he had cared for her a lot and they had been serious for 2 years and thought things were going well. Since he had become single he wasn’t really looking for anything right now, just decided to focus on hockey and getting his team back on track to getting to the playoffs and hopefully a third Stanley Cup. He himself had been in a bit of a slump, it was then he noticed her wearing a pink “birthday girl” sash.

He smiled as he skated over to where the girls seats were, and the girl holding the phone saw him skate over to them, he pressed his finger to his lips telling her to not make a sound. She smiled at him.

“Why are you smiling like that?” Sara asked her. “Do I look stupid in the picture?”

“No, not at all. Let’s take another one the last one is a little blurry.” Katy told her trying to sound normal.

Sara fixed her hair and looked at the camera again, but then she felt a presence behind her and had a funny feeling of who it was but didn’t want to believe it.
Then she heard a tap on the glass behind her and she turned around and saw the Captain standing there, and she couldn’t believe it, and thought she was dreaming.

“Happy Birthday!” he told her through the glass.

“Thank you! Good luck tonight!” Sara said amazed that she was able to speak, she looked up into his brown eyes and immediately realized she could easily get lost in them, and she wouldn’t mind.

“Let’s get a picture!” he told her as he made a picture taking motion with his fingers.

She silently cursed because the two of them were separated by the glass, but was still happy to get a picture taken with her favorite player, on her birthday and she was going to take what she could get. So she turned around and smiled for the camera.

“Thank you!” Sara told him after the picture was taken.

“I will score a goal for you, birthday girl!” Jonathan said smiling. Sara just smiled at him again and gave him a thumbs up, hoping it would happen.

With that said Jonathan reluctantly skated away from the glass and refocused his attention on his teammates and the game coming up. He had noticed that some of them saw him over by the glass talking to a girl, and they were smiling at him probably making some comments about it, but he didn’t care. He wasn’t sure what it was about the girl he just took a picture with. He usually did go out of his way to make fans happy, but he wasn’t sure he had ever promised to score a goal on one’s birthday before. He was happy that he had something to smile about other than hockey, especially after getting his heart broken.

Sara and Katy sat down in their seats after taking everything in, and Sara still couldn’t believe what had just happened. “Did that really just happen?” she asked as she looked at the pictures and the video that Katy had taken during her little exchange with the Captain of the Blackhawks.

“I should have taken your picture with him too.” Sara said apologetically.

“Nonsense, this is your night. I believe the Captain has the hots for you.” Katy said smiling.

“Please, he does not, he’s just being sweet to his fans, like he always is.” Sara said shrugging it off, although a small part of her wanted to believe what she was saying.

“He keeps looking over at you,” Katy told her. “and as fate would have it, he just broke up with his super model girlfriend after finding out that she was cheating on him.” Katy told her as she was looking at something about it on Facebook on her phone.

“That’s awful, I don’t know who would be crazy enough to cheat on someone like him.” Sara said, with a sad feeling inside her.

“The stars have aligned for you to meet him for a reason.” Katy said with a goofy smile on her face. Sara just laughed at her.

“You’re just saying that because it’s my birthday, and he just wants to make my birthday memorable that’s all. I’m sure after tonight he won’t remember me. Not like I have a chance with him anyway, though I can dream.” Sara replied.
Sara couldn’t help but wonder if Katy was right as the night went on because throughout the warm-ups Jonathan would glance over at her, and she couldn’t help but blush. She hoped that she wasn’t distracting him from the game at all, but as if he read her mind he fired a puck into the back of net past the Blackhawks goalie Corey Crawford, and that answered her question.

Warm-ups were wrapping up, and it was almost time for the face-off, but first the lights were turned off and the United Center was dark, and the National Anthem was going to be sung. Blackhawks fans always cheered loudly for the National Anthem, it had become a tradition for a many many years, and anyone who had the privilege of experiencing it got chills. The same guy always sang it, in his booming voice.

After the anthem was sung, it was game time, and Sara couldn’t be more excited. She watched as Jonathan skated to the center of the ice for the puck-drop, and she thought he had forgotten about her and had all of his focus on the game, but he looked over at her for one second, before looking back down at the ice ready for the puck to drop. She loved how focused he got when it came to playing hockey, and she knew he took it seriously as he should.

Fans cheered as the puck was dropped and their Captain won the face-off. The Blackhawks came out with a lot of fight in them. Sara was loving every moment of this, it was a whole new experience seeing the game this close, it felt like she was on the ice. Throughout the game #19 in red would glance over at her, and it made her blush every time.

Jonathan was able to give her what he said he would, he scored not only one but two goals in the 1st period, putting his team up 2-0 early. Katy and Sara excitedly tapped the glass at him after he scored both goals as he celebrated them with this teammates, and Jonathan tapped the glass back at them before he winked at the birthday girl.

By the end of the 2nd period, the Blackhawks were up 3-2. The fans were happy with how their team was playing that night. Jonathan stood next to the door as his teammates filed into the tunnel for the 2nd intermission. Before he went back with them he went over to the glass again. Sara looked up as she saw him standing at the glass again, after his teammates had gone into the locker room. Katy had gone to use the restroom, so she was by herself this time.

“Stay here after the game!” Jonathan told her.
Sara could only smile and nod before she watched him go into the tunnel, and she wasn’t sure if what he told her was true.

“Looks like I will be staying at the hotel by myself tonight.” Katy said smiling, making Sara jump out of her thoughts.

“You heard that?” Sara asked blushing as she combed her fingers through her hair.

“Yes I did, see I told you he likes you.” Katy said smiling giving Sara a nudge with her elbow.

“How do you know anything is going to happen?” Sara asked smiling back at her.
“I just have a good feeling, and I am really happy for you. I’m not even jealous, you deserve to have the best birthday and as of right now that word is an understatement.” Katy told her linking her arm with Sara while they waited for the intermission to end.

Finally it was time for the 3rd period, and it seemed to go by so slowly especially since Sara couldn’t get it out of her head that Jonathan Toews wanted her to stay in her seat after the game was over, and wasn’t sure what it meant. She tried not to think too much about it, and tried to focus on the game happening in front of her.

The Blackhawks ended up winning 5-2, with goals from Patrick Kane, Brandon Saad, and Marion Hossa. The fans cheered excitedly as the last horn blew after the game ended. Sara’s heart was racing and she was also getting a little nervous about what was going to happen. Of all the men in the world why was the Captain of the Chicago Blackhawks so interested in her, she didn’t feel like she was anyone special, just a normal girl from the suburbs who worked at a day care.

“I will just see you back at the hotel at some point.” Katy told her, as she gathered her things getting ready to leave.

“What? You’re not staying?” Sara asked her getting a little more nervous about being left here by herself especially if Jonathan didn’t come out to see her, but so far he has kept his word after he said he would score a goal for her, and he really did seem like a good guy, which were hard to find.

“No, he specifically asked for you to stay. Enjoy the rest of your night with Captain Serious. I expect details.” Katy told her smiling before she left.

After Katy left Sara realized the most of the other fans had left already as well, and not even 10 minutes after Katy left she saw Jonathan coming back out of the tunnel, she could tell he had just showered and he had changed out of his uniform into normal street clothes. He was able to help her come over onto the Blackhawks bench so they could talk better.

“Hey, thanks for waiting.” Jonathan told her.

“Of course, the Captain of the Hawks asked me to, and I think it’s only fair that I listen to what the Captain tells me to do.” Sara said smiling.

“Where’s your friend?” he asked after he realized she was gone.

“She went back to the hotel for the night.” Sara told him. “So why did you want me to stay?”

“I want to take you out for your birthday, and I know it’s crazy.” Jonathan said. Sara noticed that he was blushing a little bit, and it made her smile when she realized she could make him do so.

“That sounds fun, we need to celebrate this amazing win too, and your two goals. One goal would have sufficed, you really didn’t need to score two but it was amazing. This whole night has been amazing.” Sara said smiling.

“Well I wanted to make sure your birthday was special, and I just realized I never got your name.” Jonathan told her.

“You were a little busy so it’s ok, but my name is Sara. I don’t think I know yours either.” She said smiling.

“I’m kind of a big deal around here, I’m known as Captain Serious but my real name is Jonathan Toews.” He said chuckling at her sense of humor, which was something his ex-girlfriend lacked she was too serious never found the humor in anything.

“It’s nice to meet you Jonathan.” She said reaching her hand out, and he reached his out and shook her hand, and she felt goosebumps going up and down her arms.  He was so handsome the slightest touch from him could make her melt right there.

“Should we get out of here?” Jonathan asked as he stood up from the bench and offered his hand to her.

“Yes, let’s go celebrate.” She said smiling as she stood up and took his hand, still couldn’t believe all of the attention he was giving her. No guy had ever treated her like this before. She had never gone out on a real date before with anyone, and she felt that her being so shy growing up had a lot to do with it. She was also afraid of getting hurt by someone because she was so nice she saw that as an easy way of getting hurt. She had tried to put herself out there before, but with no success. She smiled though because all of those things didn’t matter at this moment, and she had a good feeling.

Jonathan led her down into the tunnel, and Sara realized where she was and her heart was racing again. “I thought you might like a little tour first.” He told her smiling, “Plus it is less likely that we will run into fans down here when we leave.”

“Are you sure I am allowed to be down here?” Sara asked blushing and she felt a little warm out of anticipation of seeing some of the other players.

Jon chuckled and rubbed her arm reassuringly. “You’re with the Captain, so yes you are allowed down here. Thought you might want to meet some of the other guys, I promise none of them are naked.”

Sara busted out laughing, and she blushed again for the 200th time that night. “Well shoot I only like them naked.” She said laughing and she couldn’t believe she said that, and she could see him blushing. “Sorry I shouldn’t have said that, I had too much beer.”

“It’s your right! It’s your birthday!” Jonathan said smiling before he opened the door to the locker room.

Sara had to prepare herself and it seemed some of the guys had left already, but she smiled when she saw her other favorite player, #88 Patrick Kane was just packing up his bag. His back was to them, but she knew it was him. She could spot the blonde curls anywhere.

“I believe you already know who this guy is.” Jon said to her as they walked up to Patrick.

“No, I don’t think I do.” Sara said as she looked at the name above his locker. “Patrick Kane? Not ringing any bells.”

“Excuse me?” the blonde man asked as he turned around. “Ah it’s the famous birthday girl Johnny was telling me about.”

“I’m kidding, of course I know who you are, Mr. Showtime. You were amazing tonight.” Sara said smiling. “My name is Sara by the way.”

Sara was so surprised at how well she was handling herself around these hockey players but she knew deep down they were just normal people, just happened to play in the NHL on her favorite hockey team, they were the reason she got into watching hockey in the first place. They deserved to be treated like normal people, and she knew they probably appreciated it.

“Thank you, I always like to put on a show for the fans.” Patrick said smiling.

“You are pretty good at hockey, I’ll give you that.” She said, making him laugh.

“I try, I don’t want to show off too much.” Pat said smiling.

“Where are the rest of the guys? Did they leave already?” Jon asked, as he put on his jacket.

“Yes, they went home to their families..lame asses.” Patrick said. “Why, we taking this lady out?”

Sara blushed when he called her lady, but wasn’t complaining at all. She loved they were both being so nice to her, especially these professional athletes, you never know how they really are off the ice, though Sara liked to think they were nice guys, and they were proving her right.

About an hour later Sara was at a bar close to the United Center with the two star hockey players, though the two put on a bit of a disguise so they wouldn’t be recognized but wasn’t sure how well it would work.

She did try to call her friend Katy to get her to come down, but she must have fallen asleep already, she glanced at her phone for a second and got wide-eyed when she noticed it was already midnight, and he had been up since 5:30 that morning. But hanging out with her favorite Blackhawks players after an amazing game, it was enough to keep her going for now. She had insisted on buying some of her own drinks, but Jonathan wouldn’t hear any of it, they wanted to treat her to each one.

Sara was already into her second Johnny Appleseed cider, and she couldn’t help but smile at the name of it since she was out with Jonathan Toews. She did notice him smirking when she ordered it from the bartender, and the boys of course ordered beer.

“Let’s do a shot with the birthday girl!” Kaner said before he motioned for the bartender to make up 3 shots.

“I’m not sure I’ll survive, I don’t usually drink like this. I’m such a light weight.” She said blushing as she rolled up her sleeves, and fanned herself to try to cool herself off but it also didn’t help that she was sitting between these two boys. “but if you insist.” She told him, as she finished the last bit of her cider, she was starting to feel a little tipsy at this point, which usually made her a little more talkative than normal, but she was already getting comfortable around them.
The bartender lined up 3 shot glasses and poured the tequila into them. They each took a glass.
“To the birthday girl!” Jonathan shouted.
“To the Hawks kicking ass tonight!” Sara shouted, which got surprised looks from both of them. “What?”

Patrick chuckled. “Nothing sweetie, cheers to you!” he shouted as the 3 of them clinked their glasses together and downed them. Sara made a face as the drink ran down the back of her throat with a slight burn, and was happy that the bartender had given her another cider and took a sip of it to get rid of the burn, and sighed in relief, as the sweet cider ran down her throat.

“Let’s take a selfie!” Sara said smiling after she put her bottle down and pulled out her phone, which had a black case with Jonathan Toews on it.

“Nice cover.” Jonathan said as he winked at her, before he took the phone from her, he used his long arm to get all of them into the picture. “One more.” He said. Then both of them did something she wasn’t expecting they both kissed her on the cheek, and she had an unplanned surprised look on her face in the picture. She loved both pictures and would always remember this night, and she knew right away Katy would hate her for missing out on this.

Patrick got up from his seat at their table after finishing his fourth beer. “I have to pee like a race horse.” He announced before making his way towards the men’s room.

“Thank you for sharing.” Sara said laughing before taking another drink of her cider. She could hear Jon laughing next to her, as they watched Pat leave. Then she was alone with the Captain again, and she looked over at him.

“I don’t know how I put up with that kid sometimes.” Jon told her as he shook his head.

“You two seem to get along pretty well, but I’m sure he drives you nuts too. You’re around each other all the time. I have a sister and two brothers which isn’t quite the same but they bug me sometimes, I suppose a hockey team is like a family.” She told him.
“Oh yes, it’s a family alright. I love those guys but there are some days where I want to rip their face off.” Jon said smiling, taking a swig of his beer.

“Well I hope nobody rips yours, I like your face. It’s a cute face.” Sara said smiling as she pinched his cheek a little, and she melted a little when he smiled at her and it was hard to tell but she thought she saw him blushing.

“Thanks, I like your face too.” He told her as he suddenly took her hand and brought her out onto the dance floor. Michael Jackson’s “Thriller” was playing. He had a firm grip on her as they made their way through the crowd of people to find an empty spot on the dance floor. She surprised by his boldness, but she liked it all the same. There wasn’t that much space so she was in close proximity to the young hockey player, but she wasn’t complaining. She started moving her body with his. She could definitely feel a connection with him dancing with him, and she blushed a little as he brought her a little closer wrapping one his muscular arms around her. She loved the way he smelled, and she loved being so close.

She looked up at him, and risked looking up into his chocolate brown eyes. She was so focused on his eyes that she almost didn’t feel his hand lightly brushing against the side of her face as he moved a strand of her blonde hair away from her eyes. This little movement from him was enough to give her butterflies, his touch was almost intoxicating. His eyes were even more so, looking at her was enough to get her heart pumping.

They were lost in their own little world for a few minutes or hours Sara wasn’t sure, but she knew she didn’t want it to end. He kept his hand on her face after he moved her hair behind her ear and she saw him move forward a little, and she felt her heart leap up into her throat. She had never kissed anyone before, but she closed her eyes and the anticipation was almost too much to take. It was worth it though when she felt his lips on hers, and she felt electricity go through her. Just as quickly as it happened, he pulled away from her just enough for them to open their eyes and to catch their breath, and she felt him press his mouth against her ear as he held her close to him.

“Happy Birthday Sara.” He said into her ear, adding to the chills already taking over her body.

Sara smiled before she wrapped her arms around his neck and kissed him back, and she knew at that moment her life wouldn’t be the same.
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PostSubject: Re: My Captain   Sun Aug 23, 2015 7:33 pm

Chapter 2

The three of them left the club after closing time, and Jonathan had left to get a couple taxis for them. Sara walked out with Patrick next to her, he helped her put her coat back on and they walked out into the cold Chicago night.

“Thank you.” She said smiling, and she pulled her gloves onto her hands. “Thank you for making my birthday so special.”

“You’re welcome. I’m glad I got to meet someone who treats us like normal people.” Patrick told her smiling, before he gave her a hug, which surprised her. He also kissed her on the cheek, which made her blush again. The two of them exchanged phone numbers before finding Jon by the curb where two taxis pulled up. Sara couldn’t help but think how adorable both of them looked all bundled up for the cold Chicago weather. She smiled as she watched Jon and Patrick hug each other.

“Good night kids.” Pat said smiling before he got into his cab.

Sara just laughed before Jon opened the cab door for her, and let her get in first. She decided it was a good idea to just stay with Jon at his house since it was so late.

“Thank you sir.” She said smiling, as she watched him get into the cab next to her, she squealed a little as he pulled her close to him before he told the driver his address.

Sara’s fairytale night continued as she rode in the back of the taxi with the Captain of the Blackhawks, her cold body was quickly warming up again as he rested his hand on the side of her neck with his thumb brushing her jaw line before he kissed her, causing butterflies in her stomach. Never had she been treated like this before by any man. She didn’t want to admit to him that he was the first one to kiss her, but that thought made her smile against his lips. The chills and goosebumps multiplied when she felt him very lightly run the tip of his tongue over her bottom lip, and nearly melted. She pulled him closer, and wrapped her arms around his neck. Before things could progress, they felt the cab come to a stop, and Sara realized they were parked outside Jon’s house.

Jonathan paid and thanked the driver before he opened his door before he ran around to her side to help her out. She smiled as she took his waiting hand, and then took a moment to look at the outside of his house. It looked rather expensive, but it still looked homey as well. She was a little more interested in what it looked like on the inside.

Jon held onto her hand as he opened the gate and then closed it behind them before he opened the front door and Sara was pleasantly surprised at how well decorated it was, even more surprised she was inside his home to begin with. She was still thinking everything that had happened tonight was just a wonderful dream she never wanted to wake up from.

She knew several times though that this was not a dream, as she took her coat and gloves off. Jonathan took them from her and hung them up in the front all closet.

“This is such a nice place, I’m impressed.” She told him smiling as she watched him hang up his own coat, and couldn’t help but think how cute he looked with his face all flushed from the cold.

“Thank you. My mom helped me decorate this place, she has more taste than I do.” He said chuckling as he took her hand and brought her into his living room.

“I can’t believe any of this, I didn’t think my night would end up being this way. I just went out with you and Kaner, we kissed in the back of a taxi, and now I’m in your house, and you just met me. For all you know I could be some crazy lunatic.” She said as they sat down on his couch. “I thought by now I’d just be asleep in some cheap hotel room with my coworker.”

“Everything you experienced tonight is real, you aren’t the only one who thinks they’re imagining things. Never thought I’d meet someone who treats me like I’m a normal person, even though I am a bad ass Captain on the best hockey team in the world.” He told her, which made her laugh which was music to his ears.

“You are just full of surprises aren’t you Captain?” she asked smiling.

“You have no idea.” He smirked before he pulled her close to him and kissed her again, and he rested his hand on her waist. Sara could never tire of him kissing her and touching her. The heat between them was building and her heart was pounding, and it had been since he had kissed her the first time back at the club, he was already driving her crazy.

Everything about this man was so intoxicating, his voice, his lips, his smile, his laugh, and she was sure there were other things she hadn’t discovered about him yet that she could add to the list.

Sara pulled away from him and stood up so she could take off her Toews jersey, and instead of just throwing it onto the floor, she laid it out on the big living chair next to the sofa.

“What the hell?” she heard Jon say as she turned back around to face him again.

“What?” she asked a little surprised by his outburst, but then she realized he was just playing with her when she noticed him smirking again, which was quickly becoming one of her favorite things about him. That was when she also remembered she was wearing a Patrick Kane t-shirt.

“Why are you wearing that ugly shirt?” he asked her raising his eye brow at her, making her laugh.

“It’s not like I planned on meeting you, let alone being in your house and making out with you, and you are not my only favorite Hawks player.” She said smiling, before she walked back over to where he was sitting on the couch.
She gasped and she squealed again when he suddenly took her hands and pulled her onto his lap. He had her straddle him, and wrapped his arms around her keeping her close to him.

“I should rip this shirt off of you, especially since I believe this particular hockey player tried to steal you from me earlier.” He told her, as he was speaking in his captain voice, as he pulled the bottom of her shirt up a little, but was disappointed to find that she had a tank top underneath it.

“Well, I am here with you Captain, and I was wearing your jersey tonight.” She said smiling at him before she kissed him and ran her fingers through his short brown hair, and she sighed against his lips as she felt him move his hands up her back, and then moved one his hands back down stopping at her hip as he hooked his finger into the belt loop, and she was beginning to breathe heavily again as their make-out session continued.

She gasped when he moved his hips up to meet hers, her soft jeggings she was wearing allowed her to feel how aroused he was already, and she smiled against his lips as she realized she caused this reaction from him, and she started to move her hips against his and she ran her hands down his neck and across his muscular shoulders.

He pulled away from her and rested his forehead against hers so they could catch their breath, and he looked into her eyes as he rested his hand on her cheek.

“Are you alright? You’re shaking.” Jonathan commented as he looked at her with a serious look on his face.

“I am more than alright, I don’t want to stop. I’m just very new at all of this, I’ve never done this before with anybody.” Sara admitted to him, as she blushed, and she didn’t realize until now that she was shaking little.

Jon suddenly looked disappointed in himself for not picking up on it sooner, but he should have noticed the signs that she was new at all of this, and he leaned back against the couch.

“Jon, what’s wrong?” she asked him as she moved to sit beside him on the couch. “Do you want to stop?”

“No, no I just should have realized you were new at this, and I’m sorry for not picking up on it.” He told her. “I really do want to keep going, but I really like you and I just don’t want things to move too fast.”

“You really are a gentleman, and so worth the wait. I knew there was a good reason why I’ve been single all my life, and a reason why I’ve never been kissed. Fate had it so I could experience all of this with you, the Captain of my favorite team, though to me you are just Jonathan.” She said smiling as she rested her head on his shoulder, as he wrapped his arm around her. “I really like you too.”

Jonathan smiled before he lifted her chin and stroked her cheek before he pressed his lips against hers, before forcing himself to pull away, never had he fallen like this for anyone.

Jon stood up and pulled her up onto her feet, and she grabbed her jersey and her purse as she let him take her upstairs. Anticipation was building as they climbed each step, and she noticed a room that looked like a guest bedroom, but was surprised as they walked past it, and walked towards a much larger room, which she guessed was his bedroom, and she blushed at the realization.

“I get to stay with the Captain tonight?” she asked smiling.

“Oh yes, birthday girl gets to stay with me tonight, no way you’re staying in one of the guest rooms.” He told her giving her hand a squeeze as they entered his bedroom, and he closed the door behind them.

His room was huge, but it was homey. She couldn’t believe she was here of all places with this man of all people, and she wondered if many other women had been in this bedroom before her. The thoughts in her head disappeared as he came up behind her and wrapped his arms around her and kissed the back of her neck, sending chills all over her body. He pulled her body back closer against his as he ran his hands up over her breasts with her shirt still on, while he kissed the base of her neck.

“Mmm I always knew you had talented hands.” She murmured as she rested her arms on top of his, and closed her eyes, as the chills multiplied on her body as he continued to run his hands over her clothed body. She could feel him smiling against her neck as he moved his kisses over to her shoulder.

“Mmm…that isn’t my only talent.” He whispered hotly into her ear, as he moved his hands down to her hips and pulled them back against him.

“Can’t wait to see what else you can do, Captain.” She replied smiling, and she could feel his lips curl up into a smile against her ear, as he moved one of his hands up under her shirt and her tank top moving them both up, and she sighed contently feeling his warm hand on her skin. He moved his other hand to the front of her pants and moved it lower along the seam that ran between her legs, making her moan softly. If he was making her feel this good with her clothes still on, she knew she was in for a treat tonight.

“You’re wet for me already.” He told her huskily, which turned her on more.

“Mmm…you’re making me wet Captain.” She replied as her breathing became more labored. She was glad that she wasn’t completely sober otherwise she’d be nervous about this man seeing her body for the first time, but even so she was a little self-conscious.

Jonathan never took his hands or his lips off of her as he moved around in front of her. He was kissing the side of her neck as she ran her fingers through his short brown hair, and then over his shoulders. She surprised herself as she ran her hands down to his chest until she found one of the buttons on his shirt and started to unbutton them, and she smiled as she moved her hand over his skin feeling how warm it was. She ran her hand over his bare chest and she could feel his heart racing, she was sure hers was racing a little faster. He followed her lead as he pulled her shirt up, and she hesitantly raised her arms and helped him remove her shirt.

After removing her shirt, he just smiled at her reassuringly before he kissed her again and then moved his lips down over her neck.

“You’re so beautiful.” He murmured against her skin as he kissed her breasts through the tank top and then he moved his hands over them and kneaded them. She gasped and she arched her back as she ran her fingers through his hair. The sounds she was making while he was pleasuring her was music to his ears.

The Captain of the Blackhawks telling her that she was beautiful gave her all the confidence in the world, and hearing those words from him aroused her even more if it was possible.

He smiled against her chest as he had her lean back against the pillows and kissed her again as he moved over her and he moved her legs a little further apart so he could get closer to her as he rested his hips over hers. He slowly moved his hips against hers, making her moan softly as she felt his arousal through her pants. While he was kissing her, she ran her hands down the sides of his body stopping at his hips, and she moved her hands inside the bottom of his shirt running her hands over the heated skin there. She smiled against his lips when she could feel goosebumps on his skin as she ran her nails over his skin, as she moved the shirt up on his body a little bit.

He kissed her once more before he lifted himself onto his knees, kneeling in front of her. She sat up and kissed the skin exposed to her from when she had unbuttoned his shirt earlier. She smiled when she felt him take her hair out of her ponytail holder, letting her shoulder length blonde hair fall around her shoulders, and he ran his fingers through it. It was quiet except for the sounds of their breathing, but it was a comfortable silence. He brought a hand up underneath her chin, and brought her up onto her knees so he could kiss her again, and she finished unbuttoning his shirt, he helped her take it off and then he pulled her closer to him. She sighed against his lips as she finally felt his bare skin against hers and it felt so good. She pressed her chest against his at the same time he pulled her hips closer to his, making her gasp as he ran his hands down over her ass, squeezing it and rubbing it through her pants.

“Mmm…I love your hands.” She murmured as she moved her hands over his beautiful body. He stopped kissing her for a moment and rested his forehead against hers and looked into her eyes and stroked her cheek.

“Are you sure about this Sara? I don’t want to make you do anything you’re not ready for.” He told her with a serious look on his face as he kept one of his arms around her waist and she knew he meant what he was saying. She knew that if she said no he would listen but there was no way she wanted to stop.

“I want to do this, I promise that I will stop you if I change my mind, but this is the best night of my life. This is also the best birthday of my life.” She told him as she looked into his brown eyes and stroked his cheek, and wrapped her other arm around his neck before she kissed him again.

As she kissed him, she ran her tongue over his bottom lip and she moved one of her hands down his body and found the large bulge in his pants and rubbed it, making him groan a little against her lips. It turned her on more knowing she was able to make him react to her this way.

“Mmm…stand up for me.” He groaned as he reluctantly pulled his lips away from hers and grabbed her hips and had her stand up on the bed. Her stomach was even with his face and he wrapped his arms around her legs as he kissed and nipped at the skin above her pants, making her laugh and whimper at the same time. “You taste so good.”

“I love your lips Captain.” She murmured as she rubbed the back of his head. She smiled down at him as he started to pull her jeggings down over her hips, she bit her lip as she watched him kiss her hips. She gasped as he moved his kisses lower to her panty covered mound.

He pulled away from her again only to help her lay back down against the big pillows on his bed, and she removed her bra, and he had taken off his pants leaving him in just his boxers.

“Happy Birthday to me!” she said smiling as she got a good look at his beautiful, fit hockey body.
Jon smiled at her and blushed a little, which made her smile. She thought he was so adorable even if he was half-naked.

“You’re so beautiful Jonny.” She told him as she rubbed her breasts with one hand and moved her other hand over her wet panties, and rubbed herself moaning a little.

“Damn, that’s hot.” He said huskily as he watched her pleasure herself.

Jon joined her on the bed, as he looked down at her half naked body, he was getting anxious to see all of her, but he very much appreciated what he could see. She was absolutely beautiful, and he could tell she was still nervous.

He bent down and started kissing her again and he massaged and rubbed her breasts, he could feel her nipples getting hard underneath his palms. He moved his hands behind her back and he held her breasts close to him, she gasped and she arched her back bringing her breasts closer to his hot mouth, as he left open-mouthed kisses on her chest. He brought his hands up to hold her breasts before he licked and swirled his tongue around her nipples, making her gasp and moan. While he was sucking and licking her right nipple, he was rubbing her left nipple with his fingers.

He moved off of her a little bit and then he moved his other hand down her body until he reached the soft fabric of her panties.

She tilted her head back and leaned more against the pillows as he licked her nipples, and she spread her legs a little for him. He smiled against her skin at the sounds she was making as he pleasured her, he kept flicking his tongue over her nipples. He loved the way they tasted against his tongue, and he was anxious to taste the rest of her.

“Am I making you wet baby?” he murmured as he smirked at her, before he leaned forward to kiss her again and slid his tongue into her mouth, and he nipped at her bottom lip.

“Oh yes, my Captain has made me wet, he made me wet when he kissed me at the club, and when he made out with me in the cab.” She moaned against his mouth.

“You mean you’re not into me for my hockey skills?” Jon asked huskily as he nipped at her breasts, as he looked up at her.
“The two goals I scored for you didn’t do anything for you?”

“Oh yes I love your hockey skills baby, and I loved it when you scored two goals for me. Nobody has ever done that for me, definitely turns me on.” She answered as she was breathing heavily as she looked into his beautiful eyes. “You don’t need to do very much to turn me on, I can just take a look at you and it’s enough to get me going.”

“Well, I am glad that I can make you feel this way.” He groaned as he kissed and nipped at her breasts again. “Does Kaner get you all hot and bothered like I do?” he asked her as he continued kissing down her body, he kissed and swirled his tongue around her belly button, and he held onto her hips while he did this.

Sara gasped and was surprised by his question. She ran her fingers through his short brown hair as she slightly lifted her hips off the bed willing and begging him to go lower.

He growled a little and nipped at her skin and kissed back up her body instead of going down when he didn’t answer her question. “the Captain asked you a question.” He groaned without taking his lips off of her body.

“No Kaner doesn’t get me all hot and bothered like you do, Captain. You’re the one I’d rather be here with.” She answered, as she rubbed her breasts, as she watched him devour her.

“Good answer.” He murmured before he moved his lips down her body again. He moved back up for a moment to kiss and lick at her nipples again. “I’ve already reached one goal tonight.” He groaned against her breasts as he moved his hand down her stomach, and then he moved his fingers inside her soaking wet panties.

Sara moved her legs further apart and she had her arm wrapped around his shoulders, and she gripped and moaned when she felt his fingers slide inside her panties. She cried out when he slid his fingers up and down her slick pussy lips, he rubbed his fingers in small circles around them.

He let go of her breast with a popping sound as he looked up at her with his sexy eyes, and she nearly came right then and there with the way he was looking at her. “Mmm…you like that baby? You like it when I rub your pussy?” he groaned as he gave her another kiss.

“Oh yes baby, feels so good! So much better than when I do it myself.” She moaned against his lips, she was so turned on she wasn’t even a little embarrassed to tell him this.

He groaned at the idea of her touching herself and he rested his forehead against the side of her head, as he continued to rub and massage her pussy. “Have you rubbed yourself while thinking of me before? Since I am your favorite player?” he whispered hotly into her ear, as he slid his fingers inside her lips. He smiled when he found her wet pussy entrance and he rubbed it lightly before he went back to just rubbing her outter lips.

“Mmm…yes I have does that turn you on?” she murmured against his lips, as she moved her hips against his fingers.
Jonathan smiled against her lips as he moved his lips down her neck, kissed each of her breasts before he continued to kiss her ribs and her stomach, while he held her ass in his hands and he had grasped a hold of her panties. “I want to see that pussy.” He groaned, as he tugged her panties down over her ass.

Sara smiled as she lifted her hips off of the bed so he could take her panties off and tossed them to the side, but she kept her legs together after taking them off. She smiled and she sighed as she watched him kiss her feet, and slowly moved his way up her legs. She loved that he was taking his time with her, and was giving her so much attention.

“You’re getting close to your other goal Captain.” She said smiling, as she rubbed her nipples and leaned back against the big pillows. She laughed when he kissed her thighs that were pressed together and then he kissed her naked mound, making her gasp.

He groaned against her skin as he could smell how aroused she was, and it made him want to taste her even more, and he left an open-mouthed kiss on her mound as he moved his hands up her shapely legs. He lifted himself off of her legs and he pulled on them to make her lay down on the bed.

She grabbed a couple of the pillows to prop herself up so she could watch him, and she smiled as she watched him move his hands over her hips. Then he moved her legs apart so he could finally get a look at her womanhood, and it was beautiful. He ran his fingers over her slit gently, and he hissed at how wet she was. Then he spread her open with his thumbs to look at the inside of her pussy, and his mouth watered.

“You are so beautiful Sara.” He murmured as he looked up at her, before he moved his face in between her legs and lightly ran the tip of his tongue over her wet slit.

Sara moaned and whimpered each time he stroked her with his tongue, he ran his tongue up and down and around her outter lips before he spread them open with his thumbs.

“Mmmm…..Jonny! Ooh that feels so good!” she whimpered as he slid his tongue up and down her inner lips and teased her pussy opening with his tongue, swirling it around. Her toes were curling and her eyes were rolling into the back of her head.

“Your pussy tastes so good baby girl.” He groaned as he kissed the inside of her thighs before he spread her lips open more and just looked at her juices coating her pussy. He rubbed her with his thumbs and he held her hips down onto the bed, making her sigh contently as she rubbed her breasts, and then she started to rub the back of his head.

He pulled her hips off the bed, so he could see more of her beautiful pussy. He spread her lips further apart and smiled when he saw her clit. He smirked up at her, before he leaned forward and teased her pussy entrance again, and slid his tongue into her pussy. Then he slid his tongue up to her clit and lightly ran his tongue over it before he swirled his tongue around it.

“Mmm…shit! My Captain is a dirty boy.” She moaned loudly as he held her ass in his hands, and he was so strong he wouldn’t let her move her hips, he was in complete control of her and it turned her on.

“Your little pussy is so good.” He groaned as he slid his tongue into her again, making her moan. “Mmm…moan for me. You like me dirty birthday girl. I’ve scored two goals so far tonight.” He smirked. “I wanna make it a hat trick.” He groaned as he moved his tongue up to her clit.

“Mmm…Captain! Please, make me come!” she moaned, she had been so aroused ever since they left the club, and started making out in the cab, she needed release. She was sure he needed it too, but he was so focused on her needs. “I need you Captain.”

He looked up at her, as he still had a hold on her ass he licked her pussy a few more times before he left one more open-mouthed kiss against her pussy, making her moan softly.

He let her ass fall back onto the bed as he pulled her up into a sitting position. She took this opportunity to kiss his beautiful lower body as she rested her hands on his hips as he kneeled in front of her and he ran his fingers through her hair.

“This is supposed to be your night, birthday girl.” He murmured as he kissed the top of her head.

“Well at least let me open the rest of my birthday present.” She smirked up at him as she moved her lips lower to the top of his boxers. “Then you can do what you want with me.”
She moved her hands from his hips down the sides of his muscular thighs, and she smiled when he gripped her hair slightly as she kissed him through his boxers.

“My poor Captain needs release.” She murmured as she looked up at him, and the look he gave her was one of desperation.

She smiled as she slowly pulled his boxers down his hips, and she gasped as his hardened member sprang free and almost hit her in the face, it was also because he was big. He was so beautiful though, and seeing him for the first time made her even more aroused than she was before.

She looked up at his face, and he was blushing a little probably unsure about how she would react to his size, but she smiled up at him. “You’re so beautiful Captain, this is the best birthday present I could ever ask for.” She murmured before she ran her hands up his thighs. She rested a hand on his thigh while she ran her hand up and down his beautiful cock.

She looked up at him, and she heard him curse and she saw him tilt his head back. “Shit.” He groaned. “Your hands are so soft baby, I’m glad you like your birthday present.” He told her as he ran his fingers through her hair.

She smiled before she continued to give him a hand job, and it was a great feeling to see him lose it, it was so beautiful and arousing to see. She swirled her tongue around the head of his cock, and moaned when she was able to taste a little bit of precum that had come out. She heard him gasp the moment she ran her tongue over him.

She was forced to stop as he had her lay back against the pillows again and he kissed her, sliding his tongue into her mouth.
“I need you, I need to come and I want to come inside you.” He groaned as he spread her legs apart, and he rubbed the tip of his cock against her pussy.

“Mmmm…I need you too baby.” She moaned as she gripped the back of his neck. “Give me that cock Jonny.”

“I’ll be gentle with you, I don’t want to hurt you.” He told her as he slid a couple of his fingers into her pussy.

“I’m ready for you Captain.” She assured him as she spread her legs more, and moved her hips against his fingers.

Jonathan moved her hips up more, and he positioned himself above her. She helped him out by spreading her lips open so he could see better. He watched her face for permission.

“Please Jonny, I need you baby.” She moaned.

Jonathan grabbed a condom out of his nightstand and slid it over himself, making her moan and bite her lip. “It’s so hot to see you touch yourself that way.” She said huskily.

He looked into her eyes as he slowly slid himself into her hot, wet pussy. She gasped and moaned as her body stretched to welcome him inside her, she winced a little but it didn’t hurt as much as she thought it would.

“You feel so good Jonny. Keep going.” She moaned and she knew he still had to break her virgin barrier, then she felt him hit it, and both of them were nervous.

He leaned forward to kiss her, and he caressed her body and her breasts as he pushed his way through her barrier, making her gasp against his mouth.

“Oh my god!” she gasped as she gripped his shoulder. He moved his lips down her neck, and kept rubbing his hands over her body to ease her pain, the last thing he wanted was to hurt her.

“Are you ok?” he asked as he looked into her eyes.

“Yes, oh you feel amazing inside me. Keep going.” She told him. She gasped and moaned as he slowly pulled himself almost all the way out, and slowly slid himself all the way back in.

“Fuck, you’re so tight. You feel so good around me baby.” He groaned as he licked her nipples as he continued to move in and out of her.

The pain was quickly subsiding and all she could feel now was so much pleasure, and she arched her hips trying to take him in deeper.

“Oh yes Jonny! You feel so good! Give me that cock!” she whimpered and moaned as he gripped her hips, then he moved one of his hands between her legs and started to rub her clit.

“I’m already getting close baby. You feel so good! You like that? You like my cock inside you?” he groaned.

“Oh yes, your cock feels so good! Make me cum!” she screamed as he continued to move his fingers against her clit, then he leaned forward to flick his tongue over her nipples, sending her highly aroused body into overdrive.

“JONNY!” she screamed as she came hard after a few more thrusts, and she ran her fingers through his hair as he kept licking her nipples.

Jonathan stopped and looked into her eyes, hearing her cry out his name like that was enough to send him over the edge and spill his load into the condom he had on, crying out her name before he collapsed on top of her, being careful not to crush her.

“Mmm…Jonny that was amazing.” She said smiling as he rested his head on her chest as they came down and caught their breath after an intense love-making session. She sighed contently as she rubbed his back and kissed his forehead.
He kissed the side of her neck before he propped himself up onto his elbow and kissed her again pulling her close to him. Then she laughed all of a sudden, causing him to look at her.

"What's so funny?" he asked curiously as he kissed her nose.

"I was just remembering something I said earlier tonight. Tonight they were giving away Toews Bobblehead dolls, and I told my friend Katy that it was too bad that I couldn't take the real Jonathan Toews home with me instead, turns out I was wrong. Well actually you brought me to your home." she said laughing as she looked at him. "Oh and for the record, you're the only Blackhawks player I ever want to see naked." she smirked as she remembered her other comment earlier when he was showing her the locker room.

"I am glad I was able to bring you home, and I'm glad you only want to see me naked." he chuckled before he kissed her.

“Happy Birthday Sara.” He said smiling against her lips.

“You can say that again.” She said laughing as she stroked his face and looked into his eyes. “Thank you, this is the best birthday ever.” She told him, before she let out a yawn.

He kissed her forehead before he let go of her for a moment to take the condom off and then he took a wipe out of his nightstand to clean himself up. She watched him take out another one and went to take it from him.

“Allow me baby.” He said smiling.

Sara smiled at him as she leaned back against the pillows again and spread her legs, and she sighed contently as he used the cold wipe to clean her pussy after making love to her. For added measure he used his tongue to make sure the inside of her pussy was clean too, and she moaned contently as he did so.
After both of them felt fresh and clean he had her get underneath the covers before he joined her and wrapped his arms around her, and kissed the wide of her head as he held her close to him. Both of them ended up falling asleep as they held each other.

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